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Deja Discord, Part 2: Discord Who?

  "Wh-what did you do to me? Wha-"
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!!
The crowd had gathered to celebrate the Element Bearers job well done defeating Discord, master of chaos. However, they got to see a new reign of chaos from him-For even less than last time. When the smoke cleared and the screaming subsided, the eight ponies stood on the dais... Wait, eight ponies? The crowd was sure there were seven up there, the only other being was...
"Discord," The princess said firmly. "You have been drained of your powers. You are now under temporary arrest until we can figure out a new punishment."
The strange new pony on the dais looked at her in shock. "W-what's worse than THIS?! Celly, you are truly a cruel and unforgiving God, now aren't you?!" Princess Celestia aimed her horn at him. "Don't push me further, Discord. You're already mortal."
'Discord' Looked himself over. He had been turned into an alicorn. Good, he still had some magic. His brown coat gave near the legs for different colored furs. Discord's tail was large and red, knotted at the end with  lighter shaded fur at the tip. His wings were still mismatched. His face was altered to that of a normal stallion, but with his signature brows and goatee. A regal black mane flowed from his neck. In any case, Discord-although he wouldn't admit it- looked pretty cool.
Discord scoffed at Celestia. "Please, Tia, you made one mistake! I still have my magic! HAHAHA!" He lifted his hoof-only to realize that he couldn't snap. Discord lowered his head. "Eh, gotta get used to that..." he muttered under his breath.  His horn activated, and let out a large flash and a pair of ridiculous sunglasses appeared on his face. "Well, I'd love to stay and glare at each other, but I've got some chaos to wreak!" Discord activated a teleportation spell. A bright flash filled the hall. When it cleared, Discord had a large grin on his face. "HELLO, MANEHATTAN!" He screamed to the crowd. Everypony remained silent. Celestia stepped up to him. "Discord, I have hindered your magic. You cannot teleport or use spells stronger than 10 units." Discord looked at her in shock and disgust. "Well, why not just rip off my horn and wings, why don't you?!" Celestia glared again. "I am sentencing you to public service for a year. Good luck in the real world, Dizzy." With that, she smiled at him. He stuck his tongue out at her.
Twilight and her friends stepped up to Celestia. "Princess," Applejack started. "Exactly... what kind o' public service do ya' have in mind fer 'im?" Celestia grinned at the ponies' concern. "Simple, Applejack: He will work in Ponyville until further notice." Everyone started to protest. Discord grinned at Twilight. "I look forward to seeing you later, my dear." Twilight's face turned red, both with anger and at the way he said 'my dear'. The crowd receded, for they saw that there was no more to celebrate for. The Element Bearers headed home too, getting ready for the hell that was sure to come with Discord.
Part 2!
To clear up now so there's no confusion later,
Discord has a bit of a relationship with Celestia. He simply toys with Twilight, just because he likes to see her frustrated.
And frankly, I do too. :icontrollfaceplz: Problem, Twi?
Anyways, thanks for reading!
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Sora200 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Wait a second, if the elements didn't work, and those are sopposed to be stronger than celestia, then how is she able to take away his powers?
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Foshi64 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wrote this a long time ago, and I don't think I thought that part through enough XD
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Sora200 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Then may I request a rewrite considering the obvious flaw there? Seriously, Discord is Q in another form. I think you should include the continuum in on this. They should be the ones that take his powers away. Also, he's supposed to be powerless, so he should be an earth pony, not an alicorn.
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Foshi64 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry this is such a big problem. However, I don't really have the motivation to rewrite this old crapfest. The whole lot of this "Discord" series is all old and poorly-written; the only reason I keep them is if anyone wants to read and laugh at how bad they are. A sort of self-inflicted pain, if you will.

And I believe I wrote him in as if his powers were 'weakened' so to speak, to the point where he can only perform the most basic of magic (it was a horribly executed idea, I know)
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Sora200 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Ah well. (shrugs)
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